IB Psychology HL & SL Topic 9 — Exam Guidance Paper 2 Section B Research methods ~9 min read

Writing a Strong ERQ in Paper 2

One compulsory essay, 15 marks, about a study you have never seen. It sounds impossible to prepare for. It is not, because the study changes but the tools do not: the same six key concepts, applied to whatever is put in front of you.

📘 What you need to know

The method, start to finish

From unseen study to finished essay 1. ANNOTATE sample, method, measure, ethics 2. CHOOSE two or three concepts that fit 3. ONE EACH a paragraph per concept, applied 4. JUDGE what the study can and cannot show Step 1 takes five minutes and saves fifteen. Annotating the study in the margin turns it into a plan before you have written a single sentence.
Concepts are chosen to fit the study, not the other way round. Pick the ones the study gives you most to say about.

Choosing the right concepts

Most studies hand you two or three obvious concepts. The trick is to notice which features of the study point at which concept.

What the study gives you, and which concept fits IF THE STUDY HAS REACH FOR A narrow or volunteer sample BIAS An IV, a control group, a lab setting CAUSALITY A questionnaire, scale or rating MEASUREMENT Deception, distress, children RESPONSIBILITY An old study, or a follow-up over time CHANGE Perspective fits almost any study: whose view is the theory taking?
Two concepts fully developed will beat four half-developed ones, so pick the two the study gives you the most material for.
A useful safety net: bias and measurement can be applied to nearly every study ever run. If nothing jumps out at you, those two will always give you something real to say.

What a concept paragraph looks like

Paragraph pattern Name the concept → define it in one line → point at the exact feature of the study → explain the consequence for the findings → suggest what would improve it.

The fourth step is the one people skip. “The sample was all male” is an observation. “The sample was all male, so the findings cannot be generalised to women, and any conclusion about the behaviour in general is overstated” is a discussion.

Worked example

WORKED EXAMPLE

In the early 1960s, Milgram ran an obedience experiment. 40 male volunteers from one US town were paid to take part. In a lab, they were told to give increasingly severe electric shocks to a stranger, up to a level labelled fatal. The shocks were not real but participants believed they were. 65% went to the maximum level. Discuss this study with reference to two or more key concepts. [15 marks]

Three concepts, one paragraph each, plus a judgement. Below are the paragraph cores.

Bias The sample carries several biases: all 40 participants were male, from one town, and they were paid volunteers. Volunteers tend to be more compliant and may have felt obliged to please the researcher, and having a maximum level on the machine may itself have suggested that reaching it was expected. So the obedience rate cannot be read as a general human figure. Causality The lab setting may have caused obedience as much as the orders did, since a high-status scientific institution signals that what is happening is legitimate. 35% resisted, which shows the situation did not force obedience. And if some participants doubted the shocks were real, the internal validity of the causal claim weakens further. Responsibility Participants were deceived about the true aim and believed they were causing serious harm, so protection from harm was compromised and many left with a distressing belief about themselves. Debriefing reduces but does not remove that harm, and the study would be unlikely to pass ethical review today. Judgement The study demonstrates something real about situational pressure, but its sampling and its ethics both limit what can be concluded and how far the finding travels. Three concepts, each applied to a named feature Every paragraph points at a specific detail of the study. That is what “discuss the study” means.

💡 Exam tip

⚠ Common mix-up

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