IB Economics SL Topic 5 — Assessment and Exam Skills Paper 1 Exam skill ~9 min read

Structuring a Paper 1 Essay

The two halves of a Paper 1 question are built differently and marked differently. Part (a) is a clean explanation with no judgement in it. Part (b) is an argument that has to name real examples and end with a decision. Writing them the same way is the quickest route to an average mark on both.

📘 What you need to know

The two shapes, side by side

Before writing anything, picture the shape of each half. Part (a) is a straight line from definition to conclusion of the theory. Part (b) is a loop: theory, one side, the other side, then back to the question with a verdict.

Two halves, two different shapes Same question, same topic, completely different answers 10-mark part (a) 1 define the key term 2 set up the theory 3 diagram, fully labelled 4 chain of cause and effect 5 land on the named variable no judgement needed 15-mark part (b) 1 define and set up theory 2 diagram and analysis 3 one side, with an example 4 the other side, with limits 5 judgement with a reason examples are required Evaluation belongs on the right-hand side only. Putting it in part (a) earns nothing and takes minutes you need for part (b).
Both halves share the same theory. What differs is what you are asked to do with it once it is on the page.

Part (a): the 10-mark explanation

This half is a demonstration that you understand a mechanism. Define the term the question uses, set up the model, draw and label the diagram, then walk through the steps in order until you reach the variable the question named. Nothing else belongs here.

A rise in income, market for a normal good Demand shifts right, so price and quantity both rise P/unit Q/period 0 income rises D1 D2 S P1 P2 Q1 Q2 Say which curve shifts, and why it shifts. A shift of demand is not the same as a movement along it. Examiners check this closely.
Only demand moves here. Supply is unchanged, and quantity supplied expands along the existing supply curve as price rises.
WORKED EXAMPLE

Explain how an increase in consumer income affects the equilibrium price and quantity in the market for a normal good. [10]

Paragraph 1: define and set up A normal good is one where demand rises as income rises. Market equilibrium is the price at which quantity demanded equals quantity supplied. Paragraph 2: the diagram Draw D1, S and the equilibrium at P1, Q1. Shift demand right to D2. Mark P2 and Q2. Paragraph 3: the chain, referring to the diagram Higher income raises the ability and willingness to buy at every price, so demand shifts right from D1 to D2. At P1 there is now excess demand, so price is bid up. As price rises, quantity supplied expands along S until the market clears at P2 and Q2. Paragraph 4: land on the named variables Equilibrium price rises from P1 to P2 and equilibrium quantity rises from Q1 to Q2. Define, diagram, chain, land No “however”, no example, no verdict. Ten marks of clean explanation is all that is wanted.
If you catch yourself writing “on the other hand” in part (a), stop. That sentence belongs 30 minutes later, in part (b), where it is actually worth marks.

Part (b): the 15-mark argument

Here evaluation leads. You still need the theory and usually a diagram, but they exist to support an argument that ends in a judgement. The examiner is looking for a clear focus on the command term, theory that is woven in rather than dumped, at least one specific real-world example, both sides considered, and a conclusion that is justified and fits the context.

🧩 A paragraph plan for 15 marks

  1. Set-up: define the key terms and say what the policy or change actually does.
  2. Analysis: the theory with a diagram, explained as a chain. This is the base everything else stands on.
  3. The case for: one strong point, developed, with a real example attached to it.
  4. The case against: costs, opportunity cost, who loses, or what the effect depends on.
  5. Judgement: which argument is stronger, in what conditions, and why. Name the reason.
What a usable real-world example looks like specific (a named country, policy, market or firm)  +  accurate  +  tied to the theory in the same paragraph
WORKED EXAMPLE

Turn a weak real-world example into one that earns marks.

The weak version “Many countries have used rent controls and they did not work very well.” Why it scores little No country, no time, no policy detail, and no link to the theory in the paragraph. The version that works “Cities that cap rents below the market level, such as long-running schemes in parts of Europe and North America, have reported falling numbers of units offered for rent. That is the shortage in the diagram appearing in practice: at the capped price, quantity supplied is below quantity demanded.” Named, accurate, tied to the theory The example does not replace the analysis. It is evidence that the analysis describes something real.
WORKED EXAMPLE

Using real-world examples, evaluate the impact of imposing a maximum price on the rental housing market. [15]

1 Set-up A maximum price is a legal ceiling set below the market equilibrium. Its aim is to make housing affordable for lower-income households. 2 Analysis with a diagram At the ceiling, quantity demanded exceeds quantity supplied, so a shortage appears. Landlords supply fewer units at the lower price; more tenants want them. 3 The case for Tenants who keep a controlled flat pay less, so their real income rises. Named example of a city scheme, plus what happened to rents there. 4 The case against Shortages, queues and informal payments; landlords converting property to other uses; the quality of housing falling because there is no competition for tenants. 5 Judgement with a reason “A maximum price protects existing tenants in the short run, but because supply of housing is inelastic in the short run and more elastic over time, the shortage grows. Unless it is paired with building more housing, it treats the symptom rather than the cause.” Command term met, both sides, example, verdict The conclusion earns its marks because it says when the policy works and why it stops working.

💡 Exam tip

⚠️ Common mix-up

Up next: Structuring the Paper 2 Response — the other 15-mark essay, which looks similar on the page but is marked on completely different things.

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